Final Crit with Graham

One of the first things Graham picked up on was the type on the back of my printed cards. He pointed out that it was too big and the font and colour didn't go with the illustration on the card. He also said that the cards felt like they needed more than just two to make a proper set. This si alwaso important so I can see a variety of reactions and then select the most successful cards, rather rather than just presenting people with the designs I strictly like.

One of the main things he said I need to focus on is getting an exhibition space for my turkey once its finished. I mentioned that I wanted to contact 'art in unusual spaces' in Leeds and see if I could get one of their spaces. With the actual turkey itself, from my explanation and looking at the Illustration, Grayam said he felt it needed to look more realistic and edible to make the aspect of the human fingers coming out more shocking.